You are a shelter to the heart
injecting my veins with obsession over you
my mind would never succumb
at times, my heart would break loose
you aspire to what you cannot reach
and learn a lesson impossible to teach
Your eyes can easily lie
each minute causing me new incisions
your words sound so true
alleviating the fire of my indecision
In the night I'd engulf my pitiful dream
In the morning you'd repeat the same scene
Love will not defeat pride
your fake smile will fade away
purge my heart of its sins
tonight truth will lead your words astray
And when the sun rises once more
I'll let go as if I've never loved before..
Sorry, I'm not allowed to love you ..
Thoughts of you, warm my bones...
3 months ago
My tiny lil brain refuses to understand poetry but nevertheless I applaud your effort because I know that no matter how much I try 2 lines is all that I can make rhyme :D
The new look.Peaceful, but it could be more cheerful! :) But it definitely looks very meaningful and mature :)
You know what..I've never thought poetry would be my thing, but here it goes..you never really know what your mind is hiding!
Thank you :) I know it's a bit dark but I thought the blog title wouldn't fit any cheerful template, and so I changed it with this one.
You're amazing! <3
What I am trying to get at Nema is that life is not fair at times,but keep the faith. Because one moment is all it takes to change everything and steer things towards happiness and peace. Positive thoughts, its said attract positive situations :-)
Besides poetry, if you feel like, do write about what's on your mind. What you like, the places you like in your country. I would LOVE to see and read all that :)
Thanks for sharing the new url link with me... :D
You hit home when you say: "tonight truth will lead your words astray"
^^ very beautiful!!
keep it up... <3
my fav. lines of this beautiful piece:
your fake smile will fade away
And when the sun rises once more
I'll let go as if I've never loved before..
wow, I quite miss your writings, sorry for not checking up every now and then, but inspiration abandoned me, not just me writing, but also I don't feel like checking blogs, neither do I feel like updating mine..
anyways, ramadan kareem ;) and thanks a lot for telling me that you changed the url ;) you're learning lol, kidding..
salam,
Huda~
Tranquility: I will do some posts for you ;) I, too think that the blog is getting a little bit boring hehe.
Noor: Lol no problem sweetie :D
By the way I want to show you this post in my other blog, it's about a book I read yesterday, I think you'll like it, since you're a reading freak :D..here: http://road-to-faithfulness.blogspot.com/2009/09/whatever-you-think-think-opposite.html
You'll like the quotes;)
Huda: Haha yeah See? I thought it'd be good to tell you!
Thanks sweetie. And it's totally okay I know the feeling, I know it sucks :S. I hope you find your way back to writing! I really miss your posts!
A friend of mine told me to talk a walk and try to inspire myself by everything..I did it and it was great. In the early morning, I gazed and contemplated everything I saw and tried to combine it with ideas. I think you should do it too :)
Best of luck ;-)
yes.. I think that would really help.. but the place where we live in, we don't go out much.. we're either in the car, or in a house, or in a shop.. it's really hot here.. and I don't walk much.. nobody does.. mom and dad sometimes do.. but it's mostly late at night.. it sucks, but inshallah I'll find other ways to be inspired.. thanks for the thought though, I'm positive that it would have helped.. anyways, we'll see :)
Nee... This is so... beautiful. It cuts deep to the core. You are wonderful.
I'm back. :)
Welcome back love :) <3 I've missed you and your blog
Sorry for replying late but I have been off for a while now, hope you're doing great though..
thanks for the link to the post, i love it :D
i tried commenting there but it didnt work out so i'll just copy my comment here:
oh oh! that's really inspiring.. thanks for sharing it with me. i love the quotes! they're awesome, and u've managed to comment on them brilliantly!
specially the idea isnt enough! i hear ya, i mean thats really true. it hit me while i was just reading it...
<3
aaaand u've been tagged!
here: http://umazazing-wateva-ido.blogspot.com/2009/09/tag.html
Awww..thank you sweetz =)
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