There's a weeping wall between
your heart and mine,
A rising sun, dark and dull,
a barren field—
meet me there..
And we'll intertwine.
There's an empty pen,
an obsolete piano
you cannot mend,
A cold summer day—
call me there..
And we'll sing
There's a poem unfinished,
with a closure to find;
a never-ending end—
Follow me there..
And we'll unwind.
Probably not a poem. And I thought I'd be better than this.. lol
Sins that Walk
2 months ago
I love this.
I do.
You're an amazing poet.
You, truly, are.
And I love the fact that you can make your poem understood with these three verses.
Beautiful.
And I'm not just saying that.
<3
THANK YOU love =) I appreciate it, really!
I'm sorry I haven't been updated to your latest post..promise I will read them soon insha'allah =) <3
I loved the title.It's unfinished,yet the lines flow so well and create such a beautiful,sad poem.