Within the dusk-dust played a symphony
Singing for the beauty left on this earth
It was a thought fooled by eternity
When the rich and the poor pled rebirth
Notes of misery drowned in the oceans
Words of love, faith and hope; it was a war
You ignite a fire of dead emotions
Retaliating upon what you abhor
Words were ashore, with what your ships brought
Deformed, worse than soldiers after defeat
Revival wouldn't give you what you sought
Your feelings will always be incomplete
So for anguish, sing your first serenade
To live, wear your eternal masquerade
Written 10th of August, 1:49 a.m.
I had this strong urge to write a Sonnet, this is the very first Sonnet I ever write. An English Sonnet with 10 syllables count for each line, and a rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg
Thoughts of you, warm my bones...
3 months ago
beautifully written Knee! awesome! and its unfair, that you change your url and not say anything about it.. thats why I haven't commented in awhile coz everytime I open your old one it says that theres no such blog, and I was like: no she did NOT delete her blog!! but thank God I found your new url! :D el7amdolela,! :D
soo what happened to the contest?
tc,
Huda
oh this is beautiful, ;) thanks for giving me the new url!! :D
and ur perhaps right on what u said in ur last comment, it may be that i cant let go because i dont exactly know what they are, i've never thought of it this way before, i do need to figure out what i wanna let go of!! will let u know how it progresses, thanks a bunch!!!!
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Huda: Thanks sweetie :) and so sorry about the url thingy hehe, it's my fault. Don't worry I love this blog lol.
The contest..well, my club won :) I was so proud of them. and there were so many cool poems actually.
AWWWW thank you for asking sweetheartie (=
Tee cee too <3
Noor: hehe no sweat :D
Thanks hunnie =)
and yeah you probably should make up your mind, and insha'allah things will go great =)
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ohh thats alright :) glad to hear there won't be no deleting of this blog ! :D
and ohh congrats to all of your club ;) I'm really happy :D
Thank you sweetie :)
For the first attempt this was brilliant! I know for a fact I couldn't do this. Keep going girl!