The lines on your face speak wisdom
while between my lips lie unspoken words
Your eyes held so many hidden truths
Alas! my breaths spoke vain lies.
Silence always used to guide
A truth that could never be denied
"Hope" was written on the palm of your hand
"Suicide" was scarred on my wrist
I fear running my fingers across your palm
For I destroy everything I touch..
The smile on your face was promising
The frown on mine would never disappear
I finally had the courage to look you in the eye
and I let out a sigh of relief
My heart was a desert with no emotion
our silence led to a truth of no confusion
It was always you, me and the smell of spring
And everyday you'd teach me how to mend
I'd always cry and tell you"good things always flee"
You'd smile and say "Let it be, just let it be".
Thoughts of you, warm my bones...
3 months ago
that's really beautiful, i dunno but ur material r stuff that defo go through straight to the heart!
loooooooved this: "It was always you, me and the smell of spring
And everyday you'd teach me how to mend"
^^ i am speechless!!
OH-MY-GOD!! Nema was this really you writing it! I am audience to such a brilliant piece of work!! WOW!!
If someone can let you be, and still appreciate your silence and want to be with you, you've hit something. Something really good :) The underlying emotion made me smile and feel so so so good :D (I now proceed to read it again :D)
Noor: you're romantic hehe.
Thanks hun :) just for your information, this wasn't really between two lovers..I'd say friends or an aged wo/man (not raally aged) and a teenager or a young girl/guy.
Stillness:I'm so glad you like it, I knew you'd like this because of the optimism and hope I expressed there.
You really do encourage me to write these kinda thoughts, and I can TOTALLY see that other hopeful person in YOU! =)
Thank you both, you're awesome!
I so enjoyed your writing...it's very good when it can become meaningful to different people in different ways..it was beautiful!
I should say I came here from Stillness's Blog!
Wanda! Yup I've seen you several times there :) thank you so much for the support and for passing by. (=