I thought we
were two
-invincible power-
Combined together
Beneath the wings of
Love
Then again I watch
the hue
Fading in the gardens
I was mistaken..
With the delusions they
filled me of
I see children
Playing in the playground
Their smiles make me cry
As if my tears are their shelter..
As if their smiles are war inside of me
And gardens are heaven's miracles
I hold the tears in my eyes-
I embrace you, but I can't,
I smile for the kids but they won't
My salvation has become my exile
My garden is just another dream that lies..
And then I'm the invisible..
NOT the invincible.
Written today 12th of March, 1:15 P.M (YES in college hehe)
Written for a challenge in my poetry club =)
It's supposed to be describing (me) the old woman sitting in the garden, with her imagination or what she sees
Thoughts of you, warm my bones...
3 months ago
Wonderful! And all this happened while you were in college! Man!!! Liked it a lot :-)
haha..yeah actually I don't consider it that good lol.
Thank you sweetie :)
"I see children
Playing in the playground
Their smiles make me cry"
أنا كمان لما بأشوف أطفال بتلعب بأزعل
بس بأزعل عشان بيبقي نفسي ألعب معاهم مش أكتر :))
كلمات حلوة
"Written today 15th of March, 1:15 P.M (YES in college hehe)"
بس ازاى 15 مارس؟؟ والنهاردة اصلا 14؟؟ ولا هو فيه ايه؟ :))
ah ana 3'elett fe3lan
thanks ya gameela :D
I see children
Playing in the playground
Their smiles make me cry
As if my tears are their shelter..
As if their smiles are war inside of me
And gardens are heaven's miracles
حلوه قوى الجزئيه ديه :)
girl dont you think you understand a lot at such an early age :)...i read your posts and they are lovely....not to mention that i wrote a poem sometime back with a same title "where were you?" :)...keep writing i liked your posts
Dina..thanks hunn =) it is my fave part too fe3lan !
Ani..aww I'm blushing already, thank you so much, I've been writing poetry since 5 years, it's probably why I write good stuff now. thank god you didn't see my other old stuff haha.
Will try to check on your "where were you" too =)