It's when the stars stop shining
And the fake twinkle's poisonous
It's when tears stop falling..
and your heart is no longer tenacious
it's when colors are no longer colored
And paintings no longer give you the relief
It's when purple dies and red is the slayer
Your colored life will be the saddening grief
It's when the sea loses it's fishes,
And it's blue color turns to gray
It's when poets lose inspiration
and words they can no more portray
Here I cry in silence..missing the parts of me
There you live a life..that's what you need
My questions remain unanswered, open wounds leave a scar
Yet you never tried to reach me, and I'm lost in finding where you are..
Thoughts of you, warm my bones...
3 months ago
It's ironical that in one moment, someone looses everything and someone else gains everything. The pain is very evident and hence needless to say, beautifully written. One does emerge out of numbness, sooner or later. A matter of time. Take care :-)
nice writing ya nemo :D
Goo on :)
Thank you both =)
Poems or words with negative emotions r usually beautful.
Thugh, I'm kinda stuck here wondering...if FISHES is rite? I thot the plural of fish was fish..or am I rong here??
Ill visit u more.
Anand. :-)
the loneliness , the desperation, the aimless unending search which is continued inspite of being fruitless ......all very wonderfully put .
it has a scarring effect and its saddening as intended to be .
looking forward to more of your writings.
Anand: I looked for it in the dictionary and fishes was right. I don't know but I guess both are.
Thank you for this observation :)
and thank you for taking the time to read my crap haha.
Todays writer: Thank you hunnie =)