You..
are the savior
to my thoughts
Yet, you-
like a dying butterfly-
Lie down on the floor,
Unable to save yourself..
You twit me..
For not holding on..
To a life worth fading,
Yet you die on
We are two different reasons
You die because you were never loved
I die because I never could..
And we have the
same ending
I was just trying to write some free verse..I don't know if this went well or not.
Anyway it still isn't a poem.
Thoughts of you, warm my bones...
3 months ago
Again! Kind of sad, but Really nicely written. Even though it's not a poem, I still couldn't come up with something like this myself! Good work Nema :-)
A hello from a first timer. :)
The lines did convey some emotive feelings. And a bit ironical too.
Seems you love penning down poems, seeing from your previous works.
Keep the thoughts flowing :)
Thank you both =)
Prashant..thank you for taking the time to read my blog really =]