An elusive painting-
discolored;
black horizon
in the mid of day,
dew drops fall
on deceasing plants
of copper leaves
spring:
camouflage
I took a swim through the colors:
-when night prevailed-
dark blue skies
once the moon committed suicide..
it was a starless view
caught me for the wrong hue-
feebly
blind
I beheld meteorites settling
on my earth,
while in pain I wondered
how everything's changed
to devastate
my constellation
Ashore, I clung to the last thread,
where my painting was still beautiful,
to find seashells retreated with the waves
and stones crying on their own
I took all the colors and walked away
pursued the light;
too late it was, for reaching the doors
of salvation
And I'm left
forever
forgotten
Written July 18th, 10:33 PM
-Yay finally a poem =) this is for a contest between my club and another club on the site poems-and-quotes.
Thoughts of you, warm my bones...
3 months ago
I loved it, specially this part:
"I took a swim through the colors:
-when night prevailed-
dark blue skies
once the moon committed suicide.."
Very well written, ;)
I hope you win ;) all the best, thumbs up for this one ;)
If someone should get the award/prize it should be you, you and you alone. Inshallah :)
You are amazing girl. The day you get famous, do think of me and mention it to the press ;-)
Noor: THANK YOU for choosing my fave stanza too =)
Huda: I don't really mind losing, I just want MY club to win. the awards there don't matter to me.
Thanks sweetie =)
Still: Thank you sweet lady! if I ever published a book I'll make sure I mention every person who keeps reading my blog and encourage me. So don't worry..P R O M I S E
Insha'allah =)
so you're going to be representing the club by this poem? or what is the contest about exactly, if you have a link that talks about this contest or ur club, I'm interested to check :)
reply to ur comment on my blog: :O, isn't that obvious! I'm a huge fan since reading the sixth book, I mean I read the others, but wasn't a huge fan but after the sixth I'm a certified fan, -I luuuuv Ron :D- lol.. don't you like HP?
Huda: they are two club, mine is RTVW (Release the voice within) and the other is called Beyond a Poet's Mind.
A challenge of the members from my club and from their club.
Yes I got a link :) here is it : http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=121428
You'll find my poem #32 hehe. See there's a lot of poems..and the judges are from neither clubs.
Thanks for asking, seriously it means a lot =)
About Harry Potter..lol yeah I thought it was pretty clear.
I don't really like it..or to be honest I'm the kinda person who turns love to hate when I see everyone liking it without getting anything (I don't mean you..people here in Egypt can love anything just because everybody does).
So Yeah I used to like it before :)
But that doesn't mean I (totally) hate it.
I hope you don't hate my honesty now lol.
oh cool, I'll check the link, thanks..
and yeah I get what you mean, people in the middle-east in general not just in Egypt love anything thats popular and famous, but for me I've been reading the books a long long time ago, and I was really looking forward to this movie, which turned out to be great actually :) thank God!
You should try to go see it, it's worth it, coz it's somehow different, not just about magic and wizards, it's much more.. ok I gotta stop blabbering lol.. and I'm not bothered by your honesty, no I appreciate it :)
the thread on the link has almost 38 poems, how many will be chosen? and how many has your club particpated in? cool contest, and beautiful poems, I read a few randomly, it's gotta be tough to choose the winner!
I did watch a couple of parts..umm I can't promise I'll watch it hehe.
Everyone's got their own passion anyway ;)
Yes the contest is tough, and those two clubs have the most talented poets of the whole site, so yeah you can imagine!
There will be I think 3 winners..I don't know how they're gonna choose them, I would've lost my criteria if I was in the panel haha..it's so hard!
My club has participated with 20 poems..from poem #19 to the very last one..the above poems are of the other club members. :)
ohh cool! so is this like annual? and good luck to your club :)
and thanks for answering my questions :)
No problem :)
It's not annual, not even weekly haha, this is the first club-to-club contest ever held on the site, because those two clubs are the best clubs on the whole site, maybe there's another one also. So yeah it's really tough lol.